Welcome back! I'd just checked it out, and it was pretty interesting. The story is easy to follow, and the character has vibrant expressions.
There are a few scenes that confused me, however. The first one was the panel right before the child threw the telephone out, and the second one was when he realised he'd ran out of paper. I don't really understand what the first scene is implying, and as for the second scene, I think it would be more obvious if we see the book directly from his POV, so we can clearly see that the book is now empty.
Good luck on your comic! 