Hi, there, guys. I'm writing a novella web series on this platform and I've written a Prologue for it. What do you guys think? Is it good or bad?
Synopsis: In this high fantasy epic, after dying from an incurable disease, eighteen-year old Mike is reincarnated into the world of Mysteria as a poor, homeless man for survival. Having had enough of his misfortunes, he goes out on a quest after a princess was kidnapped and demons attacked his kingdom. How will he succeed in his goal?
It's a western Harem that'll contain a loli type woman, a magical priest, a cat woman, a merfolk woman, a snow nymph, a couple kingdoms, a lot of villages, and an airship travel
