My new Web Comic ( maybe give a read?)

[MondayInks]

Hello people of tapas (i'm new here, so I don't really know what other greeting to start with ...) I've recently Published a chapter of my new Web Comic on WebToons! the link is:

F.A.T.E

Give it a read ( feedback is welcome, i'll add it to my notes!) Also if you have a comic on WebToons, feel free to leave the URL to it and I'll give it a read!
, Cheers,
MondayInks

[amirakwolf]

Hey, I liked this! I'm interested in seeing where it's going.
There's an awkward angle choice for a panel here and there, but nothing too drastic. I think the most jarring angle was the one where Ari is walking away from the TV. You would have needed to tilt the TV and its stand as well to create the dutch angle for that panel because right now it looks like Ari is about to fall over. Outside of that, I enjoyed most of the dialogue. Speaking of which, I reckon you meant to write "The tour will start soon" instead of "The tour will start start."

Anywho, this was a good start and I'm looking forward to what happens next and how Ari (and company) will tie into everything!

TL;DR: Good job!

[shaozc]

Hey not bad =3 im interested in reading more x3

Your art style has an appeal to it tha complements the story its telling and it definitely seems were in for a ride =3

As @amirakwolf previously stated tho there appears to be alot of conflict-of-angle in some of the pages. You are definitely not afraid to use Dutch Angles and Dynamic angles in scenes to add character and feeling to the pages so keep it going =3 however just watch its application on certain scenes

Ether way i'm subscribed and waiting for more x3

[Hazumirein]

Interesting! Subbed :3

By way of review, I'm certainly curious about where the story is going to go, so you're doing good there. You also seem to have a good grasp on lighting and color, and I'm loving the detailed backgrounds and exploration of different angles. The thing I would say to work on is just basic anatomy and proportions, particularly drawing faces at different angles--sometimes you nail it, but sometimes there's a super thin arm or an eye that's not in line with the other, haha. There are also places where the shading seems a bit harsh or messy, but that may just be a stylistic choice you've made. Anyway! Long story short, you're doing fine, keep at it and a lot of that art stuff will work itself out in time

Anyway! Here's my comic on webtoons; it's on Tapas too but it's farther ahead over there:

DreamCatcher