Need a good critique hmu (read for a read)

[samsung17728]

Read for a Read, i will try to get to everyones comic in a timely manner if your interested Heres my comic i hope you enjoy Never give up on your comic goals

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[DiscountedArtist]

I think I've seen your comic before, not sure. I'll look at it again and tell you what I think. And since this is r4r I'll put my comic here as well.

Discounted Comics | Tapas

EDIT: The comic is kinda blurry. Maybe it's my computer being weird, idk. Also, I like your font and your color scheme. And here's a little tip about webtoon ratings: Don't pay attention to them. Many people will rate your comic poorly out of jealousy.

[ItsAvocadoToast]

I know I read yours from my thread, but I don't know if you read mine... I'll just still leave it here, hope you don't mind. Its a comedy series called Avocados And Toast:

Avocados And Toast | Tapas

[samsung17728]

its up to you but having an interesting background goes long way to make the comic feel complete. also i would try to work on the character to have more dramatic poses to help assist the comedy aspect of your comic. don't give up keep working.

[samsung17728]

i would also try posting on webtoons i found more success on their in comparison to tappas

[samsung17728]

i would try to include a simple background like a gradient or something to help the piece feel unified i would also recommend that you post on webtoons bc there are more people on there than on tappas

[DiscountedArtist]

I am on webtoons, but I’ve been finding more success on tapas, probably because of this forum