Need advise on my comic plot and characters

[Insanebaker92]

I do need advice from a story building pro that sees my story and give me an advice to make it better. Right now I do feel a bit lost here and a bit unconfident about it .

[JoshRaed]

Well what do you need to hear specifically?

[Insanebaker92]

Ideas on worldbuilding and plot. I just need to share with someone in private and that person could give me an idea or suggestion to make it interesting.

[JokesterComics]

I wouldn't call myself a story building pro, but I've read lots of books with good story building, so I'd be willing to help if you need

[ArtGremlin]

What do you have story-wise so far? No one can give advice on nothing ^^

[Insanebaker92]

@ArtGremlin @JokesterComics

Ok, so this is what I'm planning to do. I wrote my ideas in the book and binders like this in the picture. So I will share everyone my ideas privately about my characters, plot, story, worldbuilding that I wrote down and then I need people to give me an advice and their creative ideas on improving my story. Cool?

[Insanebaker92]

I'm kinda a bit lost in my ideas and need some ideas from people

[JokesterComics]

Sure, that's cool :>

[Insanebaker92]

Ok, I guess it's just the two of you. I wish more people will come in to help.

So shall we start the discussion of my characters?

[JokesterComics]

I'm ready when you are