Hi! we are from Step one studio !we're currently creating our first online manga here.. and need some help to make it better Our manga is OTHERWORLD It tells stories about a group of people with superpowers gathered together by the military to fight an unknown two-dimensional creature that suddenly appears and wreaks havoc in their wake.... it is a shounen, battle manga.. so i promise you with a lot of action scene we planned this manga to span for a year.. or more if there's more people reading it which gives us morale boost XD we want to hone our skill, and make a great manga for you to enjoy..
so..please please pretty please we need your thoughts and feedback for our manga.. and critiques are welcomed also..feel free to promote yourself and your manga here as well
enjoy or manga here : http://tapastic.com/series/o
it looks fun and isn't bad. Here are a couple tips.
otherwise , seems awesome
cool!! awesome!! thank you very much!! XD