Hi, I read your prologue! ![:smile: :smile:](/images/emoji/emoji_one/smile.png?v=3)
In my opinion, it's very easy to read. For the art consistency, I can't tell yet because it's still a prologue (2 different art styles are drawn).
But overall your art style is beautiful! The story is interesting as well. I can see the effort you put in!
Keep it up, I'm interested to read more!