Need some feedback

[spacewaste12]

I would really appreciate any feedback on my comic:

2350 | Tapas

And would gladly review any of your comics!

[crabbu]

i think your choice and use if colors is very fantastic! imo, tha anatomy needs work^^

[spacewaste12]

Thanks! Yup, I really need to work on my anatomy, idky but i can never seem to draw shoulders right =/

[TimCaloweh]

I think the writing may need some work. Other than that you seem to be doing well.

Here's mine if you want to look in on it.

The Rainy Days | Tapas

[spacewaste12]

I like the contrast between your characters and the dialog is pretty decent, but you might want to compress some of your pages, they tend to drag on for too long and it loses the punch line. Overall nice comic!

[NDmangaka]

Rune Symbol | Tapas

I would appreciate some feedback

[crabbu]

oh yah if ya want to you can review mine too https://tapas.io/series/Star-the-magnificent

[spacewaste12]

Your comic really reminds me of madoka magica, my opinion might be a bit biased considering i read it before hand, but personally i enjoyed reading your comic. The art generally improved over time, the story took a few turn i didnt expect and the characters are likeable. You might want to work on colouring your work though, monotone might work on manga, but you wont be able to compete with comics with that extra depth.

[crabbu]

thank you very much