hey there! just checked out what you've got so far and gotta say, it's looking nice! the layout is, for the most part, easy to read and understand, and the art conveys motion impeccably well.
One suggestion i might have for you is to come up with a different description for the project?
Your tagline on the sidebar is very vague, and if i hadn't seen the art first i would have had very little interest based off this line alone. For coming up with a description the rule of thumb generally follows the 'elevator pitch' style: if you only had a short elevator ride to describe your plot to someone, how would you do it without losing their interest? The best answers are usually 1 or 2 sentences long, and entice people with the very basics.
(For the comic Candel and I are doing, our tagline is "Two idiots just trying to survive the daily grind accidentally get wrapped up in a mob war." It's both concise and descriptive.)
besides that kinda nitpicky critique, I'd say you've started things out really well! definitely worth a sub based on what i've seen so far!!
