I checked out your novel and I can say that you write quite well. It got my attention at the very first episode.
I just subscribed to it so I won't miss the next updates.
I can say I'm new as a creator in Tapas, and I just posted my some episodes of my novel yesterday
It's about a fantasy world focused on a specific desertic race, where plots and twists happen while the male lead tries to solve them out.
It turned to be a mature story about investigations, political scenario, crimes, and democracy dilemmas.
I hope you can give it a try and see what you think about it as well.