hmmm episode 1 is a bit of a mixed bag for me. I'm personally kind of wary of stories that start with "I bet you're wondering how I got into this situation" type quotes. I think it would have played better for me if there was build up too. If I were to imagine starting a comic in a similar way it would go more like:
Start with a chase scene in the rain. Girl trips and falls and scrapes herself up. She turns back and realizes she's caught and is backing away frantically. Then the kill happens. No text. No sound. Nothing because we, as the reader have no connection to anything they're saying. Maybe the victim let's out a "please don't" before she's killed at most. then [3 days earlier] or however long ago.
Art is a mixed bag for me as well. Somethings seem better than others but you clearly have potential and skill! just a few weaknesses to shore up to really get it to a higher level.
I hope you don't mind my full critique here lol the series was short and new so I could finish it quickly and I had a few very clear thoughts about it that I wanted to share since you were asking for feedback too
here is mine!