Hello!
If you wouldn't mind I need some feedback specifically on if my scenes visually make sense. I have aphantasia (unable to picture things in my head), so It's almost impossible for me to know for sure without feedback. Feedback on anything else is great too!
The scene I'm most concerned about is a fight scene starting at the end of Bathrooms:5/6 and going into Bathrooms:6/6, but if that's too much any other scene is fine. Thank you!