I love fight scenes
waves Hi, Lina!
I believe you're already subscribed. I wouldn't mind a more detailed feedback. Likewise, let me know if you'd like a detailed feedback from me, because I've been reading your work as a casual fan on the down low as well
You're so sweet to offer this! I had a quick look at yours, and dannngg it's really good. Mine isn't as hooky or well written but I'd love any feedback, if it catches your interest
It's a fantasy / BL wip
I'm always looking to improve my writing skills, so I don't mind getting feedback. Not sure which chapter/episode you need to focus on right now. I'll leave that up to you if you find anything critique-worthy.
Hello! I'd be super glad if you could read mine. I only ask for you to read any chapter besides the first one! Thank you!!
If your still taking requests here's my latest chapter. I'm new to all this so ANY feedback would be welcome. Be warned I write weird. Thank you for offering to do this!
Hey, hey! Of course I'm always open to feedback! I have your work saved to continue reading, I'll add critiques as I go
I thought it was pretty hooky Left you one for now, will keep going with feedback if you'd like
Thank you so much!! If I find time to re-write this thing I'll defiantly re-balance some of the dialogue. We need more reviewers like you.
Mine is an illustrated Light Novel. Hopefully, it still fits. You can just critique the writing, ignore the art if you like lol
Hi Are short stories allowed as well?
I would love to get feedback on my work! I'm very open to any criticism and if there's anything I should edit in my work, I'll do the best I can. Thanks for the opportunity btw!
Thank you so much!!! Your feedback was great, thank you! And ooo yes please to more feedback if you feel like it! It's so helpful! I got so excited in this reply, so many exclamation points But, yes please to all the feedback (if you want/have time)
thanks for this supporting idea, here's my novel, you can choose any episode you like.
I've only got one chapter up so far but I'd love to know what you think of it. I'm going to try to get the next two up within the week.
I just want a critique on the prologue or the first chapter. Thank you.
wanna a critique to improve.
Thank you
I'd love a critique for my first chapter/ep of The Small Town Horror. I'd mainly love to know how it works as an opening.Thank you.
Sure. First or latest chapter, either one.