Yeah it looks super cute!! And don’t be too down, I think people just wanted to help. You’ve seemed to take some of the advice too, making her more readable through a lighter color, but still it gives off the vibe of how deep her skintone is. Don’t get too discouraged, art is a lot of mess ups and just learning from it.
Or is for me
currently, I’m reworking your part of the trade. My brush pen I was using for Mara, not to be confused with Mora, RAN OUT so it got all effed up and splotchy and terrible so I had to paint over it
I wasn’t intending to make you a painting but it’s sort of turning out that way. In art I feel like I make lots of mistakes but I just work with it until something does start working.
Keep with it, you got all your characters to draw >:0!! Stories to tell! I mean to say I just don’t want to leave you feeling discouraged, sending care 