Ok so how this works! Show of a few good snippets of you're story with line breaks in-between them and put in some music to!
C glareed and launched into battle her hair was glowing when she took off her mech. The king smirked while orange and red magic sparks flew. The witches cheered at the sight of battle in the way wolves do to wounded prey.
C jumped back and Lexy looked at the king wondering what weapon he was using. Only to see he wasn't using a traditional blade there spread from his lower back are four long black tails that at each tip they form into a weapon. Now that Lexy looks at them the tips look to be swords.
The king ran his hand through his hair and smirked,
“a fight you want mother? Very well let’s fight.”
The king launched at C and sparks flew. Lexy backed away and she turned to face the witches who to her surprise only watched with a smile on their faces when they began to chant “the traitor will pay! Down with the traitor and her treasonous ways!”
Lexy looked from them and back to C who looked like she was about to lose when suddenly her hair burst to flame and her skin began to boil and crack. The cracks glowed a bright fluorescent orange.
The king smiled,
“I wonder if you will rise from the ashes if I kill you. You and I both know you’re only half Phenix!”
The blood king pushed against C with his tails and Lexy began seeing horns emerge from his head. She rubbed her eyes and did a double take. He did have horns.
C moved faster with her blade and even though she’s away from it Lexy can feel the heat.
Varkin nodded and the two went down a cave to their right. When they went down it the ground didn't just rumble. Lexy heard the ever familiar roar of Alvagorian. Lexy quickened her pace. She heard the sound of chains shaking and then Lexy saw why, when she entered a gigantic cavern that had seven immense arches. Each arch had a huge chain that was each tethered to Algavorian.
Algavorian’s once blue eyes were both now a haunting orange. His entire body was coated in a dark wispy energy. Albis walked up a set of stairs that led to a deck in front of the dusted wendigo. When he did he put on a dark metal helmet that let his own set of haunting orange eyes glow. He held in one hand a bladed spear and looked at Lexy.
Albis smiled and looked at Alvagorian. The dusted wendigo lowered it’s head revealing it had a saddle attached to it’s lower neck. Lexy’s eyes widened and she looked at the cave. She felt her blood go cold,
“The others won't make it if we battle here.”
She looked to Varikin,
“Hang on to me.”
Quickly Varikin turned into his ferret form and hopped onto her shoulder. Lexy dashed toward Algavorian and Albis while she put her hand out. The second she touched Alvagorian she thought of the open fields in the veil.
The storm was still raging and the only light was the lightning crackling off the storm and the haunting orange light that seeped from Albis’s and Algavorian’s eyes.
Albis’s eyes widened and then he smirked,
“I see the tale is true, you really are a hero of Discord’s making. You are the guardian.”
He sighed as if he finally found peace in the world. But as all peace it never lasts forever and he gave out crude laughter when he tightened the grip on his spear. While Algavorian bgan to take in a deep breath lightning crackled.
“You're a hero right? THEN DIE LIKE ONE!”
Lexy’s eyes widened while she quickly began to run,
“Varikin, let's kick this lizard’s but!”
Lexy focused her energy on Varikin while he leaped into the air and transformed into his Nevermore form. Quickly Lexy grabbed onto Varikin’s back. This let them barely escape the bolt of lightning from Alvagorian.
Varikin took to the skies while the rain fell in sheets and the lightning crackled like the drums of war. Lexy could see nothing but darkness until a lightning bolt struck. Varikin glanced back at her when he circled around Algavorian.
Lexy watched what looked like mechs at first until they started diving letting out multiple loud shriek-like noises and then they hit a point in the air and let out a flash of magic attacks. Lexy turned back to see the blood king's set of magic attacks; one came close to her and she had to duck to doge. She quickly saw Varikin was fine.
But Meko, Meko had a hole where his chest should be. Lexy rushed up to Meko, her eyes wide and hot tears had begun to rush from her eyes, “Meko come on please, please, please no! No! Don’t go, I come on. Please.”
Only to see him hand her his short swords, smile, pat her head and open his mouth “Its ok, I can't think of a better angel to take me to heaven and guide me through battle. Thank you Lexy'' His voice was gentle and soft.
Lexy hugged him and screamed tears falling off her face “please no, come on I. It wasn’t supposed to be like this please no!.”
Varikin looked down, “Lexy..”
She whiped her head to face Varikin “no! I'm not leaving him, he'll just let me take him back please!” Her eyes glowing a deep purple.
Varikin changed to his human form and walked over to her shaking his head “no, he is already gone. There's nothing you can do.”
Lexy falls silent when she gently sets Miko’s dead body down and turned to the blood king angry tears falling when the whites of her eyes change to black and those storm blue changed to a dark purple “you. “She seethed “ I am sick AND TIRED OF THIS.” Lexy dropped all her weapons and her mech all except her fathers knife. Varikin can feel the pure rage and how the thin glass holding back an ocean. “L-Lexy what are you? '' it shatters.
She doesn’t respond to her hair and eyes change. Her horns extend and then come back to frame her face. Her nails changed to claws and fourteen long black tails appeared. A set of black feathered wings spreaded from her back.