PLEASE,Help me with some feedbacks?

[JJay]

Hello, everyone! I am actually looking for someone who can read my first chapter and give me some reviews? This is the first time I am writing anything. I would love to hear your feedbacks.

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Thank you ^^

[Waldositta]

If you want some indepth feedback I can DM you.

[JJay]

Yes please! I would love it!

[WildMoonCrow]

Is your cover AI? Tapas doesn’t really allow AI covers, and it might make people assume the story is written by AI as well

[JJay]

Oh shoot I didn’t know that! I created the thumbnail by myself. But the cover art I did get it done with AIs help.
Will change it today!
Thank you sharing the knowledge ^^

[Waldositta]

I sent you a message

[wolflu66]

I'm not good at literature, and English isn't my first language.
However if you need feedback on illustrations, I'd be happy to help.

[JJay]

I have changed them! Thank you so much^^

[JJay]

Hey same here. I am not good at English and it is not my first language as well. To be honest I am an Artist! I tried making a manga but it takes a lot of time. So I decided to write.

Thank you for the suggestion^^
Will reach out in the future I need help with the illustration!

[Krysteena]

I subbed I am your 10th sub! I will read when I get the time. Please sub to my book thanks!

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