Please read my comic and comment :)

[diestreve319]

Hi everyone!
Please read, Searching For Kazehaya, a fan comic of Kimi Ni Todoke. Please comment too. <3
Rei-chan and I both collaborated to create Searching For Kazehaya.
I'm the writer while Rei-chan is the artist.
Together we are Dream Studios.

Searching For Kazehaya :: Summer Fan Girl | Tapas

[Rivana]

Very cute story! I really really love the artwork . I think it suits the theme very well. The pastels are so easy to the eyes. I think you have a bright future here on Tapas. Keep up the good work.

[ScribbleJay]

I agree! Very cute story with some very beautiful artwork. The pacing and panel layouts are very good, and I love the use of flowers as decorations for the panel borders.
One thing I can point out is the dialogue, which sounds a little awkward sometimes. It's still easily understandable, but if you can find a proofreading buddy, preferably a native English speaker, that would help a lot.
Also, not every reader might be familiar with the anime in question. Maybe you could work in some short descriptions of it, or at least describe Kazehaya a little more? Why is Jenny in love with this particular character? What is his personality like?
This is a fantastic start! Seriously, keep it up.

[diestreve319]

Thank you so much for your positive comment. I'm happy you like the story and the art as well.
Yes, I do hope me and Rei-chan will have a bright future here on Tapas.

[diestreve319]

Thank you so much for your positive comment. I'm very happy you think the story is cute and the artwork is beautiful.
Actually, in the upcoming episodes little by little there will be a description about Kimi ni Todoke and there will be more descriptions about Kazehaya and why Jenny loves him, as well as his personality. That's all included, and written in my story.

[Merui]

I have only read the first chapter, and I am amazed by the art - especially the colors and the details! I can definitely see the artist’s unique style in it. Plus, I am a fan of the manga/anime myself so I appreciate it a lot ️

Similar to what has been pointed out, I noticed that the narration can be a little disgruntled and/or disjointed, so you might want to review them or have someone do proodreading/editing.

As for the content, I think it’s quite timely and relatable as well. IMO RomComs have somewhat become too mainstream (if that makes sense) which may cause people to only see the idealized or dramaticized side of love.

Anywho, great start there. Good luck! Pretty happy to sub since I’m personally interested in it

[diestreve319]

Thank you so much for subscribing to Searching For Kazehaya. I'm happy to know that you are also a fan of Kimi ni Todoke like me.
Thank you also for your good comments and advice.

[Merui]

You’re welcome! Again, wishing you guys all the best! I'll be reading it soon hahaha because I’m weak so I need to sleep qq