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Jan 2019

Feel free to leave a link to your portfolio here if you need a critique.

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I think the biggest thing that sticks out to me is the color scheme. Another color might compliment your illustrations better than the green text. I would also suggest moving the artist's bio to the bottom, especially since there's nothing there atm.

For the full color illusts, I would recommend removing the Chapter titles/logos from the first two images so it doesn't distract from the illustrations themselves. :slight_smile:

Change "My Comic Pages" to just "Comic Pages". I think the fourth page in would probably be a stronger first image to show. It's more dramatic and some nice effects to show off.

You have a great variety and I think just the right amount of images in each section.

EDIT: Throwing down some critique first @Zyephen
Based on what I'm looking at in DeviantArt, I think overall your work is really clean--only gripe is that I think the closer objects are to the "camera" the thicker the linework should be to signify that. It helps break apart the scene--example, plague doctor on Ch17-04 has thinner lines than some of the characters in the middle panel.


Most of my "portolfio" stuff is on facebook/instagram


This is my first time jumping into the world of comic creation, so I'd love some feedback--keeping in mind the main project I'm working on (ERAFLUX) is going to print, so its not as mobile/web friendly as I'd like.

I'd love to hear any suggestions on how I can maybe break up my panels in a way that works better for mobile--even if it means separating the versions between print and Tapas.