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Hi, this is my entry for the contest and would love the feedback thanks!

The Blind Courtesan

Sypnosis:
Jun, a loner who only cares about money and games, found himself trapped within a novel in the body of a blind courtesan. A novel called, ‘The Regressor’s War’, a Murim world where the Constellations and the Towers had taken over, where the dark forces lurked holding secrets.

Jun couldn’t care less about the Regressor however the Tower wasn’t going just to let him be. The Tower assigned him an impossible mission, making sure Jun didn’t let the Regressor die and guide him through everything. Jun ensured the Regressor survived through any means necessary, even if he had to sacrifice himself…

When Jun realizes he’s the only one who knows the future of this world, he utilizes the knowledge to make sure he and the Regressor survive the Towers. Using his strategies and foresight Jun overcomes his enemies and hidden plots. As he delved deeper into the Tower, Jun discovered his fate had long been decided before he was born.

Nice! My best friend and I, we do the same. We are so doubtful all the time that we also use that system. If you are interested here is my story. It's for the contest so i have only 3 Episodes as for now :blue_heart:

Right now I'm only doing positivity passes because I'm in need of the positive vibes! I may do actual critiques at some point. Hit me up if that happens :slight_smile:️

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I’d love a little pick me up for my most recent chapters if you have time to spare! I’ll return the favor the soonest I can too :yellow_heart: man it’s rough out here with new stories :sob:

Takuya, JP, Koji, Tommy, and Zoe. Together, they live the craziest adventures, pursued by a terrible elderly criminal named Takenuchi, who was once the head of the city’s largest criminal organization. She now chases them to obtain something that could restore her to that position, something they don’t even know they possess, but she does, and she’ll do anything to get it!

Awww that's really nice of you. I'd be happy to see love on any of them. Chapter 4 is a personal favorite of mine though 🥹

11 days later

I was out of the country for 2 weeks, but now I am back! Let's do some more!!

Hello do read My Novel,

Milo, a cheerful yet impoverished college student, navigated his days with a smile despite his financial struggles. However, his life took a dark turn when he witnessed a cold-blooded murder by a menacing tall man. The murderer noticed him, and from that moment on, Milo felt the man's eyes on him everywhere.

One evening, Milo found his parents at the mercy of the same tall man. To save their lives, his parents shockingly offered Milo's marriage to the murderer. "Please, take our son instead," his mother pleaded. "He'll marry you. He'll do anything you want. Just spare our lives."

Milo felt his world tilt as the words sank in. "Marry this man?" His mind reeled at the thought, but he saw the steely resolve in the man's eyes, the gun still aimed at his parents.

The tall man considered their proposal, his eyes never leaving Milo. After a long, tense moment, he lowered his weapon. "Very well," he said. "Your son will come with me."

Milo's life changed in an instant. The cheerful college boy who once worried about exams and part-time jobs was now bound to a man whose presence alone instilled fear.

Might as well. I will warn you that the text is small in the beginning, may have to zoom a tiny bit if on mobile.
It's a two-sided story about a chicken, who's a friar, and his human caretakers running the poultry business.

Have fun!

I just massively updated my fantasy story, including new cover, banner, artwork, map, etc, and finally working towards finishing it! If you want to check it out, would mean a lot :pray:

Oh wow, I never commented on the first thread? Anyway, this seems like a nice idea, and I can't remember if anyone's read my first chapter since I did my most recent edits. Thank you in advance! :smile: