Hi everyone! So the last post I made is about me critiquing your first page right? This time it’s just me critiquing the latest page only and I’ll give you my honest opinion on it!
lol why not
I love the action sequence and the scene leading up to the assault. The smaller panels showed urgency and danger ahead. Good job! Keep going!
Right, here we are!
The art is nice, but dialogue are too much and hard to read.
Cool!Here's the latest episode
Time for round 2
Here's the comic
Sure why not?
Okey
Alright, thanks so much for doing this!!
The last page is excellent. Leaves an eeri feeling and a huge cliff hanger. Job well done!
Colors are great and character’s facial expressions is a huge plus. Keep doing your thing.
The ripped paper effects is extremely creative and leaving an open-ended chapter. Very nicely executed!
The character’s surprise reaction looks very nice! I love that you quickly cut to the next scene to showcase urgency.
Be careful of anatomy. The arm in the very end looks unnatural. Other than that, the end leaves the reader wanting more.
How come there’s no dialogue? What’s going on?
I'm down for constructive criticism.
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https://tapas.io/series/Henry-Hare-Eng/infohttps://tapas.io/episode/2880263
