@yukeen
Your story looked really interesting so far. I really like the backdrops. The colors really complement your style. Some of the 3d though looks out of place though such as the desks. It think you have a good start to your story.
Posting my comic
I'm making a manga like story. It's about two friends trying to make a story together. Despite being determined, they often find themselves off task. The story is a slice of life/comedy.
I'm making this story like a manga which means each chapter consists of multiple pages. I did convert it to a webtoon/tapas format so it can be read on this platform. If you would like to read it:
Webtoons: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/offtask/list?title_no=477901
Tapas: https://tapas.io/series/Offtask
You can read the manga version on my pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/user/25699043/series/88939
The two formats are the same story just presented in different ways. The manga version is the original and it takes into mind the pagination of story.