Sounds fun, let me give it a shot.
Opposite:
The wells that don't control the flow of magic throughout the land of Pharlahaim have mysteriously been opened by a weak spell in a not well known event, the Great Castigation. This has created a balance of power between humans and other races. Wars have ended between once rivaled nations. Disease and plague avoid cities and villages.
Keyary, a hearty and healthy boy, is thrown into this bright new world after his village, Raegone, is spared by an enemy militia. The first thing he was told to do is avoid Valase, the enslaved city of magic and dragons, to find the source of his vitality.
However, everyone who has ventured to the city since the Great Castigation has always returned. Are dragons, the guardians of these magical wells, to thank or is there a more innocent reason?
Original:
The wells that control the flow of magic throughout the land of Pharlahaim have mysteriously been sealed by a powerful spell in an event known as the Great Castigation. This has created an imbalance of power between humans and other races. Wars have broken out between once allied nations. Disease and plague tear through cities and villages.
Keyary, a frail and sickly girl, is thrown into this dark new world after her village, Raegone, is attacked by an enemy militia. The last thing she was told to do is reach Valase, the free city of magic and dragons, to find the cure for her ailment.
However, no one who has ventured to the city since the Great Castigation has ever returned. Are dragons, the guardians of these magical wells, to blame or is there a more sinister reason?
EDIT:
THIS MAKE MY STORY SOUND SO UPLIFTING, HELP!