Promoting and looking for feedbacks!

[SharpKatsudon]

Hi guys!

I’ve recently started my first original comic, “Nemesis”, on which I’ve been working for almost one year, it’s fantasy/romance and since webtoon doesn’t have its own forum, I thought tapas would be the best place to promote it !
So here I am! I’d be very thankful if I could get feedbacks on it! I’m currently editing some of the first chapters as I’m not super satisfied with it (pacing/background coloring) but I’d like to know what people think about the most recent ones

Nemesis​ here’s the link!

[mroverlord]

hey my comic is about and uninteresting guy doing interesting things basically a superhero comic

Mr.INK | Tapas

[lauragarcia511]

I'm also started my own original comic!
You can check it out if you want.

Knights of Geomora | Tapas

[Eightfish]

Why are people promoting their own comics on this thread. Katsudon didn't ask for it and it's not relevant.

About the comic itself, it's not really my genre or format, but the people in the comments seem to love it so good job on the story!

One minor thing I did notice is that the speech bubbles can be kind of weirdly laid out. Sometimes the bubbles were too big or too small, or the text was placed in them kind of awkwardly where it didn't make a nice oval shape. But that has improved a lot on the later episodes so good job on that too.

[SharpKatsudon]

Hi!

Thank you for the feedback ! When looking at the first episodes on a laptop I didn’t notice the bubbles issue but it stands out more when you’re scrolling on a phone or tablet ! I’m planning on editing the first chapters so I’ll add this to my to do list thank you!!