Realmwalker @Stargazer31
+ I enjoy the focus on Norse gods and myth. It's always nice to see that, alongside British myth.
- Characters seem to kind of pop to location to location. A little breathing room in the pacing for setup would very much help with that.
I didn't know this was a sequel until after I'd gotten a little farther in and read the description more closely. There's a lot of characters I don't know, and seemingly some plot I'm not familiar with, but I assuming that would be better cleared if I'd read what came before. I like the character designs and as stated earlier, the European folklore focus, and hope that this comic can continue to grow!
Seven Stars Silver Clouds @delladz
+ I really like the way you do the action scenes! There's a very good feeling of speed and power with how the characters move, alongside your anatomy of them. I also enjoy the creative use of their abilities.
- More than anything else, the word balloons are very difficult to read right now. I see that they're hand written, but I'd recommend getting a font? You can make a custom one based on your handwriting if you want to as well.
I've enjoyed the beginning of this comic, it's got a lot of intrigue! I like how it has pretty good pacing in regards to it's... cinematics? Is the word? Just how individual scenes are paced in your panel economy. I think it has a lot of room to grow into something great!
Here's a link to my own comic!
