Rate my art! Tell me where i can improve!

[Anime_Bolt]

I want you to rate my art so i know were to fix some things and get better.

[Darkstrong]

First of all, don't just use reflect on one side of the face.

[Anime_Bolt]

what do you think i should do to get the other side of the face equal with reflecting?

[Trevor]

personally i would just say to not bother reflecting, heads have depth after all, so really it shouldn’t be the exact same on both sides of the face anyways if it were looking a different direction... or any direction other than straight forward really, but plain straight forward views can be rather boring

[Kelheor]

Okay, now you definitely want to start with a circle, which would become a head later (pics are not mine, credits to the author).

Reflecting is a no good and you can see it, because one of the eyebrows is floating in the air (and also human head just doesn't work this way).
Also, if you started with line art for head, it is probably better to draw hair with line too, because now it looks like she has really thin hair and you can see her head through it.

[Anime_Bolt]

Thank you for the drawing and your help!

[Kelheor]

Just look for useful tutorials and look in the mirror more!

[Baguette]

Maybe work on noses a bit? The two dots look a little snake-ey
Unless it's stylized and you want to keep it that way in which case yeah just drawing both sides of the face would make it look a bit less out of place

[amortelito]

I like the eyes, dots in the cheeks and long neck. I understand that some styles don't need symmetry but if you are going for that, then you can exaggerate the proportions more.

The hair is translucent,like smoke, I can see the line of the head which is weird. If that is intentional, then make it clear that the hair supposed to look like that by adding some shades or adding some individual hairs, otherwise it looks like a mistake.

She doesn't have ears.

It is hard to give advice based on a single sketch. Maybe show us more if you want.

[beta1042]

The neck is really long.

[gh0stcr33p]

doesn't look like anybody actually rated this so I guess I'll be the first. I'd have to give it an honest 2.5 out of 10. I can see where you're aiming for in terms of the style and it could work out pretty well if you worked on developing and fixing it.

like a lot of people already pointed out: don't use symmetry/reflecting for your drawings. all I can say is that you should sketch out the guidelines before moving on to the lineart, and the anatomy needs quite a bit of work. I don't have any examples on me right now but just try to look up some tutorials on drawing faces and such. the specific things I can point out are the neck being too long, the head is shaped very oddly and it's not centered, the lines are pretty sloppy, the eyes are too far apart and the hair is in a completely different style than the rest of the drawing. I only think that could work if the whole piece was done with soft shading or something, I dunno