Read for read comics and I'll give you my thoughts!

thecrystalrook 2021-06-15 05:54:03 UTC #1

Post your comics here and I'll read it and tell you what I think. In exchange, please do the same for me

delladz 2021-06-15 16:01:55 UTC #2

Loving your comic so far! The dialogue is great, the comedic humor is just spot on XD I really get a great sense of the direction you want the action to go, I'm really enjoying all the fight scenes! I'm curious, do you draw everything traditionally and scan it? If not, what do you use? Also, I really love the character designs! Excited to see where the story goes!

Here's my comic, it's very much in the early stages but I hope you enjoy it anyways

thecrystalrook 2021-06-15 17:35:05 UTC #3

Thank you so much! Yes, I draw everything by hand and color with copic markers, then scan it with an Epson scanner:

I will be reading yours later today!

ThingsHappenInLife 2021-06-15 17:43:20 UTC #4

Here's my latest one.
https://tapas.io/series/Things-and-stuff-happen

I like making dark humour comics

Stargazer31 2021-06-15 17:45:42 UTC #5

I love the traditional art in your comic, and the action scenes are brilliant!

Mizukiji 2021-06-15 17:52:37 UTC #6

I love the traditional art, I really wish I could just draw My comic in traditional and scan them but I think It would take me too much time so I just draw digitally haha btw here's mine

thecrystalrook 2021-06-15 18:03:03 UTC #7

alrighty, @delladz, @shantanubaddar2006 and @Stargazer31 will be on tonight's reading list! @Mizukiji is up for tomorrow's!

thecrystalrook 2021-06-16 02:15:47 UTC #8

I'm really not sure why you didn't have any subscribers, your artwork is great! I really enjoyed the action scenes. You have a very good sense of motion and perspective!

thecrystalrook 2021-06-16 02:16:50 UTC #9

These all gave me a good laugh I could definitely relate to the "stop starting at her ass" bit when I was in high school

thecrystalrook 2021-06-16 02:17:59 UTC #10

I'm actually subbed to you and I've been reading here and there, so this was a good chance to catch up on a bit more. I just read through the first few episodes with Loki, and I really like your rendition of him (her?)

Stargazer31 2021-06-16 06:39:07 UTC #11

Thank you! Also, you can use any pronoun (she/he/them) for Loki.

ProjectHybrid 2021-06-16 10:54:29 UTC #12

Your story looks interesting! I'll be sure to give it a look!
If you're interested, I also make manga. Feel free to check out my series too!

Thank you!!

iHateFridays 2021-06-16 11:46:16 UTC #13

Already read your comic haha XD I like the action and the humour a lot! And I saw that you draw it traditionally, which is really cool as well. The characters are a lot of fun too.

You can read mine if you want but idrc lol

delladz 2021-06-16 14:50:33 UTC #14

Thank you so much!! I'm happy that you like my art :)) I'm so impressed that you do everything traditionally, I feel like I wouldn't be the same person without the undo button lol

thecrystalrook 2021-06-16 19:13:33 UTC #15

can you link me to yours?

iHateFridays 2021-06-17 11:23:16 UTC #16

IamKeeks 2021-06-17 11:37:05 UTC #17

Looking forward to reading and reviewing.

thecrystalrook 2021-06-17 13:02:18 UTC #18

Alrighty, @Mizukiji @ProjectHybrid and @iHateFridays are on today's reading list!

IamKeeks 2021-06-17 20:57:52 UTC #19

I like your comic. The way you choreograph the action scenes is really impressive. I think that the way things move is my favorite part! I enjoy the occasional Japanese sound effects too.

I've read up to episode 7. The story is also pretty solid and interesting. My biggest concern is that I keep hearing the phrase "space pirate," but I'm not seeing anything that makes my brain go, "Yeah, this is a pirate." I recommend adding a bit of exposition. or a scene to explain what a "space pirate" is. It would definitely help me to understand a little bit about why everyone seems to be after this guy.

But it's seriously really good work. I'm sure it's only going to get better from here on out.

thecrystalrook 2021-06-17 23:02:05 UTC #20

Thank you for your feedback! I'm trying to work into the dialogue what a space pirate is and why they're significant. I'm trying to do it without a typical anime monologue There's a bit about that coming up for you in the next few episodes, tho it's brief. I'm thinking the second arc, which I'm now writing, is going to dive much more into that.

Anyhoo, you'll be on tomorrow's reading list!