Hello! I've just finished reading your webtoon, you earned a subscriber because I'm curious about what will happen next lol. Making people want to learn more about the "rules" of your universe and its species is clearly something you do right, as you have a bunch of subscribers and patrons. Seeing oppressed individuals stand up to trash and winning is something satisfying to see lol. The style somehow reminded me of Saga, if you've heard of that comic book series, and the backgrounds remind me of classic dark, action novels- Batman, Joker etc. It looks professional.
Now,to add the bad, the white stream lines used to show the action seemed overused, panel after panel, sometimes even seeming to cover the characters too much. Alternating with other ways to convey movement would be better in my eyes, maybe just relying on the direction of bodies, hair, and her blue power one panel then using lines the next. That is just nitpicking, frankly. The episodes are long enough, I think on LINE Webtoon to get featured 'n stuff they want creators that update every week, but that is hard alone and especially if you don't use unedited 3D backgrounds.
Also, I frankly think you should ignore opinions you don't like, sometimes doing what the audience wants should be less important than you having fun, for the sake of your mind, otherwise you won't want to go forward if you think you have no creative freedom anymore I'm saying this because I'm a beginner and I don't know why I am giving feedback to someone clearly more experienced lol
If you wanna check what I did, here's the link:
https://tapas.io/series/Alandala-Comics
I suggest the last episodes, I'm not proud of the first ones anymore lol