Read for Read! Novels Edition(open)

[ScarletDemon]

Here's all of mine: I've got a little something for everyone.
Genre; High fantasy Medical Drama

Sky Garden | Tapas

Genre; High fantasy Graphic Horror

Deathblooded | Tapas

Genre: High Fantasy LGBT Romance

Shrouds and Stilettos | Tapas

Genre: Sci-fi Futurism Romance

Rain | Tapas

Genre: Low Fantasy Magic College Slice of Life + POC LGBT MC

Paradise Academy | Tapas

[Wocalich]

Okay, I'm back! Finally I can post messages again haha

[alexlcuri07]

I took a look at the chant and the first chapter. I'm personally not a fan of 1st person POV, but I'm glad to report that it was not an issue. I do wish that there were more sensory details woven into the story. And I like that the action begins right away (something I always have trouble with.)

When you have time, I would appreciate some feedback on whatever you're willing to look at.

Lacuna: A Nexus Troupe Novel | Tapas

[Wocalich]

Bumping this up so that more people see it

[Flauschwurm]

I will definitely give your novel a read it looks really cool!!!

I just started releasing my Original Story Morpho Mons here on Tapas.
It's a Novel which is also illustrated, and will feature short comic pages in the future.

It's a passion project, a remake of sth I created 12 years ago, which combines childish/nostalgic media with more mature topics.

Genres are Drama, Slice of Life, LGBTQ+
More subgenres will be added in the future. It's a bit hard to categorize, but I generally want to show the stories/identities/struggles of the characters in this setting.

Morpho Mons - Into a new dimension | Tapas

[Wocalich]

I'll check it out now!

[Aziel]

I read the first two episodes. I liked Bilana's perspective. It kept me engaged since her story seemed more complex.

Witch Tier | Tapas

[Wocalich]

Glad to hear you liked it. Checking out your novel now.

[CommanderMarty]

I read the first three chapters of your novel (I'm a fast reader) and its alright so far.

Anyways I'll place mine in here now.

Title: Jervis T Booker

Genre: Action, Fantasy, Drama

Chapter Count: 20

Summary: Jervis T Booker is one of the heroes who defeated the Orc king, and he is looking for his lost daughter, he must find Nash, the man that is taking care of his daughter, along the journey Jervis will make many friends and enemies.

Jervis T Booker | Tapas

[Wocalich]

Thanks for checking it out! I'll take a look at yours now.

[CommanderMarty]

When you are finished please tell me your thoughts. (I want to know what's done well and what could be improved)

[Wocalich]

Of course, I'll tell you

[Wocalich]

@CommanderMarty
1.You use irregular tense.
2. There should be a reaction from the thieves before they charge at Jervis.
3. wails of agony, not walls of agony
Good parts...I like the swagger Jervis has. Also, the descriptions are pretty good as well.

[CommanderMarty]

I corrected two of these mistakes.

The first and third one. (The irregular tense is mostly used to make the pacing quicker, I do think this gets better as the series continues)

[Wocalich]

I think irregular tense confuses the reader and takes them out of the experience, but it's your choice.

[CommanderMarty]

Honestly I was hoping you would read atleast the first two chapters, but I can't and won't make you because that would be wrong. (Thank you for the feedback)

[WillowTree]

Sure! I'll go check yours out now!

The Love of a Werewolf | Tapas

Edit - I read through the chant and the first chapter. While the story sounds interesting, I tend to struggle getting into 1st person novels. I don't want to subscribe and be a dead sub for you, so I added it to my bookmarks to check out again once I catch up on a couple novels that I'm currently reading.

[apexdraws]

I've already read the first 3 episodes of yours and have been meaning to read more! It really captured my interest, and I'm a big fan of stories with mythology influence.

My novel is also influenced (partially) by mythology

Katabasis | Tapas

[Wocalich]

You don't have to force yourself, I understand. I'll check out yours now. Would you like to hear my commentary as well?
Edit: I'll definitely keep reading this one! You have a new subscriber.

[Wocalich]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked my story! I'll take a look at yours now.