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I'm actually gonna be cheeky and drop mine on here being as I already read all of yours and really enjoyed it. Only asking for the first chapter ofc, I just always like new opinions on my stuff

if you already checked it out and it wasn't your thing, totally disregard this

I'd like to participate if you're still looking at some novels. Your synopsis caught my interest so I'll be giving it a read.

My novel is a Dark/Urban Fantasy, it's a little different from most of what gets posted on here.

I like the first sentence. It's simple but sets the mood right away.
"Tongue pinched between his teeth"...I like this imagery for some reason.
I like how subtle the introduction of his sexuality is.
Okay, I read the warnings. I think it might be triggering for me to keep reading but I like your writing.

Yes, I'm still looking at novels avoids looking at the clock as she whistles
I'll check yours out right now :smile:

absolutely fine! i hope the first was okay! just like getting eyes on that first chapter 'cause im still tryna fix it up a little haha

I read the first chapter. It was a bit confusing, especially in the beginning. I had to read the blurb to understand the plot. I would suggest editing it one more time.

Thanks, yeah I'm still tinkering with the blurb. Haven't settled on a concrete one yet.

My novel is a fantasy adventure story, and its still just getting started, but there's plenty more to come still.
Solvi has been living a peaceful life in her village, but not everyone in this world believes in peace. One night, her home is raided by vikings and they steal a prized possession, destroying everything she's known. She decides that it's now her duty to avenge her home and return what was lost.


Ill go check out your story now

Hello I am the writer of a webtoon called peek a boo.Pls do check it out.We just came out with our prologue

Hello, this is only for novels but I hope it works out for you guys!

I read the first two episodes, the first one cool, but the second one seemed to me like it was so long :sweat_smile:, Idk if that was the effect of my episodes, however, this is mine

● Name: Age of Magic

● Genre: Fantasy, Action, Mystery, Magic

● Summary:
500 years ago, people believed that a great earthquake divided a huge continent into three ones . These three lived in peace until the day when a village got destroyed leaving one survivor. A boy named Leo, but little did he know of the adventure that awaited him.

● Why should you read it ?
Hmmm, If you like elves and demons or dragons, it's gonna be here, if you wanna see the journey of boy who lost everything and wants to get stronger in order to get his revenge, it's also gonna be here, if you like magical stuff, and how it works ( There're available episodes that explain how magic works " The origin of magic " check them out if you wanna know how, and let me know ur opinion about it ), or maybe you like competitions, and if you didn't find any of this, just know that it's just the beginning .

● Hopefully you check it out

The style of it :point_down:

That's okay, this is a casual thing after all. I'll take a look at your story now. :blush: I don't understand why you subscribed though, if you didn't like it

Okay, I checked out the first episode. I think it's a bit too short, though if you like it this way then I have no complaints. :smile:

I don't like to let someone without subscribing, even if he doesn't care about my work, but it's cool that we boost each other,
I didn't said I didn't like it, it's just the length .

I understand, I read the second episode as well, I think the core idea is pretty good. :slight_smile:

My episodes's length will increase a little by a little, the max is between 400 word till 900 word