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Apr 2024

Just read all the way through the latest chapter. Coming from Wattpad where practically all stories are some sort of dark romance, I can say this is a lot better. The main thing I disliked (but that is my personal preference so don’t take is as a problem to correct) is the pacing of the first chapters. I get that you want to go directly to the beginning of the story, but I would have enjoyed more if you slowed down more on analyzing the days that Riona had as a slave. Don’t know, it felt rushed. Other than that, I think that everything is pretty good, I’ll keep reading so be sure to update soon!

I read the first chapter, very interesting story. I love the start of the world building though. I would like a more clear picture of what the world is before the time skip.

i'll check it out so don't forget to check out mine and the ones above

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I think it really nice and cute. And like that we can actually understand the pokemons.