Read my first chapter & i will read yours and tell you what i like the most

[JJay]

I will go first

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[Phoenix_fly]

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[wesley01x9]

very nice idea. Here is my Story:

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[Rodrigo_Silveira]

Read The New Arcanists (Novel) | Tapas Web Community

Read The New Arcanists (Novel) :: Tyler | Tapas Community

Bloodlines. Magic. Betrayal...

Tyler always thought he was just an ordinary teenager—until he discovers he's the heir to the Scarlet Arcanist, the most powerful magical bloodline in history. Now, creatures born from shadows hunt him, secrets threaten to unravel, and his family's past refuses to stay buried...

Chapthers below:
Vol. 01:

The Twilight of the Arcanists
Jake
Tyler
Hyan
Tyler
Jake
Hyan
Tyler
Monica
Tyler
Hyan
Tyler
Hyan

[Phoenix_fly]

Seriously that's good one. I even don't know when I finished five chapters.

[mohdadeebace]

Will you give a try to my work???

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[JJay]

I loved the conversation between the voice/God and the MC. I also liked how you gave us a glimpse of what is going on in the realm and how the others God’s are involved in it. The character I like the most is the voice or the God. She has a strong presence. Great first chapter!

[Phoenix_fly]

Oh, Yeah, why not I will.

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[JJay]

I am not gonna lie, that was so cool. The art style reminded me of early Spider-Man comics. The story, the clean artwork was a treat to read. Looking forward to read more! Loved the chapter. My favourite was his internal monologues.

[mohdadeebace]

Just gone through yours - At first I thought it's an Isekai, but in the second episode - you showed the original timeline, And it hooked me to read more. BTW are you going to write more about the original timeline?

[mohdadeebace]

@JJay Subbed to you - You draw really expressive eyes

here is mine -

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[JJay]

I am invested!!!! I couldn’t literally imagine every character and the cloths, the atmosphere just by reading the novel. Although it was long, it was not boring. You held the tension till the chapter ended. I love how detailed you have written everything.

[Orichan]

I already posted on the other thread so id understand that it would not be of much benefit to you, but I'd appreciate your feedback if you feel like it

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[JJay]

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[mohdadeebace]

Is it for me or someone else's?

[JJay]

I like the 2nd chapter much better than the 1st in terms of clear dialogues and better colour tone. The first chapter was intriguing, not gonna lie. I liked how you didn’t reveal much about the plot but still kept the scene intriguing.

[JJay]

It’s for someone else, sorry.

As for your first chapter I liked how you used images while writing. And I kid you not, Darius is actually the name I picked for my character as well 🥲

I love the conversation between Mark and Darius.
Mark is my favourite character.

[mohdadeebace]

Thankyou... I hope you follow it to the end...

[PenguinAngel]

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The Monkey Prince and the Five Treasures

about yours:the setting seems quite interesting, the draws looks rough but nothing that couldn't be fixed. I can't say much for the story, it just started , but it seems nice

[suzune]

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i hope you support.