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Mar 2017

Hey, I'm an autor of This little world41. It's my first comic, and I feel a lil bit insecure about it. And I'd be grateful to receive some critic/advice or just your opinion. Plase don't give me feedback if you don't want to
And ugh, is my lettering readable? It looks unreadable even for me, but using fonts like Comis Sans seems a bit soulless for me.

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I didn't find any real issues with eligibility. With the exception of one page having a grammatical error it wasn't really bad. I've seen far worse handwriting including my own that are way harder to read.

What grammatical error? (what a shame ughh)
I'll try to do it better though. Thank you C:

i can read your lettering fine. some people might have more trouble, maybe dyslexic people? i like the authenticity of the handwriting but if it really bothered you, youre not confined to comic sans kind of fonts. you could use a font similar to the one used in your banner, i think it would really suit your comic.

also, you have great skill with watercolour! your coloured pages are beautiful.

I had no trouble reading it. And your watercolors look really good!

i loved your art, it reminded me the art on the books back in elementary school, i subbed just for the art, keep like that, it's really great to see people triying new kinds of art, also i need to advartise myself haha https://tapastic.com/episode/6052324 check my comic as well pls.

You should keep it in color. Your color pages look really good.

Hey there!!

First of all I really liked your illustrations!! They look great in watercolor!! :wink:

About the font I would say is readable but not the best to me!

I think it would look better with a free font (style: hand writing) to look cleaner and consistent throughout episodes.

Because your handwriting changes a bit from page to page I would say try finding a special free font you like or try to be more careful and consistent in your handwriting. (always have the same thickness and the same look to the letters)

Keep up and Good luck! :smiley:


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Actually I wrote those letters by myself too... But if it doesn't make any problem, I'll just continue. Maybe I'm just overthinking.
Thank you very much (^‿^✿)