I read your comic and I gotta say: there's not much advice I can give, art-wise. The artstyle is reminiscent of of old japanese scrolls and it's pretty much well done. There's just one panel (the second one) which I think should be worked on a bit more.
The leaves on the trees are almost transparent and I also suggest you put the "A story by" credits outside of a panel, so it can stand out more (I suggest you make it bigger, a bit clearer and put it in the center, in between the panels, so that you can see it as you scroll down).
One thing that I also thought was a bit annoying, at times, are the sound effects, because they make the artwork a bit more confusing, so I suggest working on that.
In this one panel, for example, sound effects were used a bit too much and positioned too near the artwork.
For the rest, though, I really enjoyed the art and the anatomy, especially, which looks good. So far, apart from the formatting and some text here and there, I think the comic is fine.
When it comes to story, I can't really say much, since the first episode is very short, but I think it has an interesting start. The beginning opens so many questions to the reader, who is naturally prompted to read more, so it's a plus for your story!
Anyway, here's my comic, feel free to give as much critique as you want. I'm planning to remake the first chapters of the story, so I'd like some feedback from other creators, especially story-wise, since the art-style has evolved over the years.
Chapter 1 goes from episode 1 to episode 7, but feel free to read as much as you want: you're not forced to read the whole thing.