Here's my critiques!
I feel like the typography can look a little inconsistent since you're handwriting it, so my suggestion would be creating your own font with your handwriting that you can use. A lot of the time, typography should be kept the same size unless you're changing it on purpose (e.g- a character yelling has larger words, while a whisper may be smaller)
Here's where you can make your own font!: https://www.calligraphr.com/en/
Another thing I noticed was that some sound effects are used as a bit of a crutch (e.g- the old woman washing her hands.) You've done an excellent job with setting the scene and scenery, so actually showing the woman washing her hands in the environment you've drawn would keep that immersion as 'wash wash' isn't really a sound effect.
Other than that, I think the backgrounds and establishing shots look great and the atmosphere you've created is excellent, you've done a good job focusing on the larvae in the composition, and I quite like the old woman just from reading the begging episodes
I'd also love to hear your critiques for my comic, but don't feel pressured to since I'm sure there's a bunch of people on this thread asking for critiques. I'd just mainly like to know any improvements I can make for the first episode for new readers.