Review both versions of my comic?

Kirara312 2018-11-18 21:33:34 UTC #1

Here is the 2012-2016 version

Here is the newer version 2016-early 2018

Taru_Chan 2018-11-18 22:23:46 UTC #2

@Kirara312 I am sorry to say this but I wonder if you can make the image bigger? also I am not sure if you are going with a webtoon style or manga style since the panels are not in an order that's easy to follow other than that please don't give up!! draw alot and make more chapters read about story writing and character development and draw draw draw draw don't give up dear and good luck!!!

Kirara312 2018-11-18 22:59:43 UTC #3

Which version the 1st or the 2nd ? Also which chapter?

Taru_Chan 2018-11-18 23:14:01 UTC #4

@Kirara312 both to be honest but the second version was better that's why I think you will get better eventually just don't give up and have fun ^^

Kirara312 2018-11-18 23:25:03 UTC #5

Thank you!

If I could ask from your perspective what was wrong with the first one?

Taru_Chan 2018-11-18 23:30:06 UTC #6

before that can I ask you what type are you going for? comic or manga or webtoon?

Kirara312 2018-11-18 23:41:08 UTC #7

A comic that is manga inspired (panels, and artwork) but does not read the same way as a manga.

Taru_Chan 2018-11-18 23:49:13 UTC #8

then shouldn't it be i mean the panels scheme abit closer to each other since it's a comic not a webtoon?

Kirara312 2018-11-18 23:52:39 UTC #9

Yes they should. I was trying at least on Tapas and Webtoons to conform to their mobile friendly styles.

Taru_Chan 2018-11-18 23:55:09 UTC #10

well then it should be webtoon style not comic style because kirara I understand your thoughts but there is nothing in the middle it's either comic or webtoon
i think this editor note could be helpful to you

Kirara312 2018-11-18 23:58:38 UTC #11

Thank you but the link is broken.

Taru_Chan 2018-11-19 00:05:16 UTC #12

sorry i think it's the forums or I am not sure here again
https://www. webtoons.com/en/tiptoon/lozolz/webtoon-editing-tips/viewer?title_no=1268&episode_no=24
maybe it's better if you copy and post it again but delete the space

it's episode 18

Kirara312 2018-11-19 00:09:33 UTC #13

I have Bookmarked it. Thank you!

Taru_Chan 2018-11-19 00:21:05 UTC #14

you are welcome kirara I hope you the best

Kirara312 2018-11-19 00:37:34 UTC #15

Thanks again ! Good luck too!

victoryofgonzalo 2018-11-24 00:20:11 UTC #16

I guess you're doing good! More practice and it'll be better and better.

sherrimorris018 2018-11-27 06:24:47 UTC #17

Great work and good luck.

Kirara312 2018-11-28 01:23:59 UTC #18

Thank you for the positive vibes !