FINISHED YOUR WEBCOMIC!!!
I do have some comments overall. First, love the dilemma with the fox and the girl; how they're locked with each other through a thread.
Looking back though, okay so one thing I would've done was potentially start the story off with an establishing of the world? Like the cosmology of it out the gate (showing who the Forest King is and all that)? Especially with a fairy tale theme. It took me a while to figure out that you're going for a folk-native american united states angle.
The thing with folk lore stuff is that it's pretty niche. It isn't like Greek mythology where everyone knows what a Griffin is or a Minotaur is.
The Puk Wudgie bit for example. That one would've been suitable with her pulling her journal out and explaining what it is or something. Same with the Wampus. I didn't even know these were real mythological creatures. Sure there's journal segments, but maybe you can do something where they pose and we see the journal pages of what they are?
I personally would've made Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and MASSIVE individual episodes. Because I really loved Force Shortened. It's so meaty; but I wished you would've gotten to that dilemma faster?
The dialogue I probably need a second-reading to figure it out, but it seems a little... skinny if that makes sense? I started to appreciate it with force shortened and it makes for digestible reading, but when you got something as lore heavy as your world, a story like this would have more meaty dialogue.
It's tricky with fairy tale worlds because the writer has to be like "Alright how do I deliver this exposition organically that doesn't come across as telly". You seem to be going for a "thrust into world" situation which is good!!! But there is such a thing as too "Showy".
Btw heads-up, this isn't a negative per-say, but I get a little BDSM vibes with some of the scenes involving the fox boy. Like the cover where he's all tied up or him in the spider-web which is a neat dilemma since he's all tied up with the girl and you use that as a way to emphasize him being tangled but also him having his pants pulled down I was like "Oh geez... I should probably mention this". Even the concept of her being tied to the fox boy? Y'know she's more civilized, he's more wild and carefree. But this is a little heads-up 
The original Wonder Woman comics the writer had a BDSM fetish and he put it in his comics so boys can be submissive (it's funny because people were like "THERE'S NO WAY THEY'D PUT SUBLIMINAL MESSAGES IN COMICS!!! YOU'RE JUST BEING PURITANS" and then you got this guy over here straight out being open saying "I am a licensed psychologist and I've been putting subliminal messages to make young boys more submissive to our lady overlords". It's funny, but I'd use that as reference to direct your story from not going into that territory if that isn't your intention.
Still though, I see potential in it!!!!! Btw you still want those Discord links to those private servers? 
