Feedback for Life of an Aspie by @Aspie_Gamer:
-Based on the title, I'm guessing there's going to be a good deal of focus on the condition, rather than some "the main character just happens to have it" thing. I like the subject; it makes the story feel more grounded even though it has its share of exaggerated zany moments.
-I see a lot of panels with headshots, i.e. talking heads. Use body language to communicate emotions and moods. e.g. Don't just show a laughing head; show what the rest of the body is doing. Is he rolling on the floor? Pounding the desk? Hunched over? Pointing at whoever it is that he's laughing at? Show us!
Showing more of the body also helps with clarity. Last panel of ch4 p6, for example, I have no idea where he's standing in relation to the person he's talking to. That might not sound like a big deal, but this kind of micro-confusions can add up.
-I also see a lot of exact straight-on angles. It makes things look more stiff. Angles are hard to draw, but try to mix it up a bit? It doesn't have to be dramatic like worm's eye view; just something subtle like 3/4 will make a difference.
-Looking at the top panel in chapter 4, page 3... I recommend avoiding very wide speech bubbles, especially since you're doing a right-to-left comic. The wider the bubble, the stronger my tendency to read everything from left to right. Obviously, that messes up the visual flow for right-to-left comics. But it's bad even for left-to-right comics, because unlike prose, the eyes follow a less structured path when reading a comic page (since you're looking at the art too). If you make the eyes follow a wide straight line of text, that clashes with how the eyes take in the visuals of that panel.
-The art has improved quite a bit. Keep on trucking!
-I like your use of tools for the background, like the school exterior. Saves a lot of time! However, you can do a bit more work to make the tool-made background mesh better with the freehand drawn figures. For example, it's odd that the lines in the background are thicker than the lines in the figures. They should be roughly equal thickness, or even the other way around (thicker for the foreground, thinner for the background). And the short, loose strokes in the tree leaves look a bit out of place compared to everything else; no other part of your style has quick loose strokes like those.
-The posters on the wall in ch4 p6 look out of place. I would definitely recommend at least tracing over them. (It'd blend in even better if you drew them without tracing, but hey, I get sometimes you need to draw a very specific, known image like that wave artwork and it's a pain to copy an exact image freehand...)
-I got a chuckle out of "Ass-Burgers" XDDD It's a bit odd though, when I remember that these characters are supposed to be talking in Japanese?
Sorry it's a bit disorganized. Hope you find it helpful!
My comic is Heart of Keol.