Reviewing Comics/Novels~!

TheBluester 2021-08-28 22:19:44 UTC #1

To the people possibly reading this thread...hello there! I made this thread because I'm pretty bored atm and I want to do my best to read/review people's works [I will be reading around 2-4 chapters at most] and give my general feedback on them!

Also, please don't get upset if I take my time to get to y'all, it is not cause of ghosting or anything, I just read slow as heck and it'll most likely take me a minute to get to people's works!

In the meantime~ if y'all ever feel like reading something new yourselves, feel free to drop a like/sub or give feedback yourselves to my newest novel: The Swallow of Storms! I'm pretty proud of my first male mc so far, so I'm excited to share him around as I'm pretty proud of the personality I've given him so far!

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Title: The Swallow of Storms
Genre(s): Fantasy, Action, Drama

Synopsis: To this boy whose heart is as unmoving as the forlorn and weary expression on his face. After a night of unprecedented tragedy that unexpectantly leaves him in service to a deity who doesn't go to his sister for free, as he goes through this new world, vengeance and the hopes of reuniting with his family are the only things that keep him going.

Content Warning: Violence and mentions of cannibalism in future chapters!

Wocalich 2021-08-28 22:20:47 UTC #2

Thank you for this offer! I hope you like my story:

vholdfield 2021-08-28 22:27:31 UTC #3

Your novel seems interesting, I really like the synopsis. I'll make sure to give it a read!

Here's my novel:

Synopsis:

Nazar and Ante's lives are totally different. Different life style, different pasts and experiences. Their paths cross when Ante begins to work for Mr. Andrews where they are instantly drawn to each other. How someone so different than you could understand you so well? Together, they end up deciding to run away from their lives and explore the country looking for a fresh start.

But what do you do when your past comes back and that you have to fight your own demons and problems? Is friendship and love stronger than blood relationships?

Time will put them through many different hardships, from their past and current life, and they will have to resolve their unfinished businesses in order to live the life they always dreamed of.

johnm71180 2021-08-28 23:01:11 UTC #4

Heres mine. Only 34 pages long(each page is 4 panels.)

Slice of life style comedy about an 11 year old tomboy and her adventures.

https://tapas.io/episode/1659818

Tailzkip 2021-08-28 23:03:40 UTC #5

Here's mine! please try not to judge the early chapters to harshly, this comic has been running for years now lol

ivanskilling 2021-08-29 01:41:25 UTC #6

Thank you for the opportunity! I would love some feedback on my current novel.

Jwebtoons 2021-08-29 02:47:16 UTC #8

Here's my battle shonen story. Hope you like it.

Shazic 2021-08-29 02:57:37 UTC #9

I love it if your if you review my story up to where I have rewritten giggles
Check out The Drifter Era on

Donley 2021-08-29 03:16:04 UTC #10

My novel's a lighthearted sci-fi adventure. Hope you like it

delladz 2021-08-29 03:23:25 UTC #12

Hello! Any critique is fine, but I'm gonna request that anything related to the text/legibility be left out cause I get that critique a lot and I'm currently working on it XD I'd love any other critique though!

chestnutriceeee 2021-08-29 06:25:43 UTC #13

Here's mine if you would like to give it a go!

Aeneas1 2021-08-29 06:42:09 UTC #14

Here is my work:

samvv000 2021-08-29 06:56:46 UTC #15

Well, 2-4 chapters sounds good to me, since mine's basically just starting out!

Stargazer31 2021-08-29 07:07:56 UTC #16

Go ahead!

Fedriz_Marini 2021-08-29 07:32:58 UTC #18

Ok, Let's do this leap of faith, I'll leave my series here.
Ps: Isn't there a "Review/Critics" section where to post this topic, rather than promotion?

GENRE: Fantasy, Sci-fi Drama
From the nights He used to spend by reading tales of "the Dreamers", the young Alfredo Ventura always longed to be one of them as well, unaware of the Potential that resides in his Echo, that could change the lives of those around him, whose Stories, connected to His, are the KEY to bring changes to the World of Gaia, and lead to its peace once and for all.

LINKS:

https://www.instagram.com/fedriz_marini/
Enjoy your stay, Have a nice day!

jenessamdsilva 2021-08-29 07:42:11 UTC #19

Thank you for the opportunity, This is my work.

fragmented 2021-08-29 07:44:02 UTC #20

hello. looking forward to see what you have to say!

kaykitsune 2021-08-29 07:48:24 UTC #21

Here’s mine, I hope you enjoy

MizzHope 2021-08-29 08:52:54 UTC #22

Hello! Thank you so much for the opportunity. Here are my works. Feel free to choose which one you'd like to make a review

hamza9644 2021-08-29 09:45:42 UTC #23

hello im folowing u hop u like min ^^ https://tapas.io/episode/1944423