I'm new at drawing (half a year experience). I usually write for myself. I want to improve.
I welcome any suggestions feedback or criticism even if you say "it's just shite!"
Anything for readability, accessibility, structure, pacing, story, anything that strikes you.
The chapters vary in quality, I'm learning as I go. I remade the beginning since the original one was atrocious not only in art but in understanding.
Right now, I'm trying to learn how to do backgrounds and landscapes since I realized the story requires a lot of settings.
The A.I. won the war when it figured out how to hack the resistance’s bionic enhancements.
In a last ditch effort the ‘No Steel' project launched, with the hope of creating humans, strong enough to face a mech.
The project was never completed. Fearing the A.I. could learn the basics of genetics, all volunteers were launched into space.
Many years later, 'Fall's stasis casket lands on a distant world.
With nothing left, he lets go of the past and tries to survive on his new world.
But this second chance, might be a new chapter of the Mech War.
Big thanks for taking the time and effort!