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So, good afternoon ladies and gentlemen! I’m Esoj “the lost chevalier” and I’m here to promote my sci-fi novel “Hope”, a space opera/grand space fantasy where humanity is at the brink of extinction under the oppressive rule of an alien race called the Kaery, who defeated us not so long ago! Well, they actually mopped the floor with us; that is a more accurate description of what happened! HA! The novel will follow Hope and her group of misfits in their adventures through space!
Well, I’m just starting, the first five chapters are up, which are officially “part 1” of the story. It has action, adventure, and interesting characters! Do you want to join in in this exploration of the galaxy? Then jump into this ship of mine! I have alcohol and chocolate! Hope you like it and have a good read! (My primary language is Spanish, so, if you find any typos please report them back to me, I will gladly correct them and thank you for that!)
See you on the space ship and thank you for reading, I'm pretty social so expect answers and interactions :D!

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Okay, I like the characters and the situation of the crash fo far! I would have chosen one of the characters and told the whole story from their point of view instead of changing the narrator from one character to another, in order to have one, or two, main narrators, but the story works so far, is fast-paced and has a rhythm. I would have chosen the leave the r*pe allegation out of the story for now at least, I believe that one has to works its way to a topic like that. Other than that, the story is good.

I see; I think the action needs to be toned down and let place to more descriptions. I was like "Woah now we are are here, no, now we are are here, now look through this character perspective, now look through this other character sounds of a fast car". I think the first character will benefit with more descriptions of the feelings and situations, more from the perspective of Moon rather than from the perspective of Kanii, but that is up to you, the author :smiley:

Wow, I love the ambiance! I can't read it all at once, you write too much and I have to study now, but I would definitely read it in my spare time! Thank you for sharing!

So I read the first part of the first chapter and I must say that I'm intrigued, I will definitely keep reading it once I found the time to do so. So far the pace is good, the descriptions are sharp and the idea of dying and coming back in another body that has already some history on his back is something interesting, only my next read will see if this new life is in another world or in another person's body. (edit: now that I read the story description [I tend to aboid those for not spoil the story] I see it is about another world, I'm a lover of lore, so I would be reading it soon!)
And for the box thing ad /info to the link of your novel, like this but without the space https://tapas.io/series/HuntersMoon /info
This is how it shows if you ad the /info:

(ooooh another werewolf story!)

And for @Esoj
this is my recently finished novel

Your novel looks really interesting! ^^ I subbed to it and I'm planning on reading it a bit later (I got chores to do lmao :joy:) But I'll definitely check it out! ^^

I don't know if you like to read comics, but I'll leave mine here in case you want to check it out. It's fantasy/mystery with a bit of humor here and there. It updates Mondays & Thursdays!

Oh Thank you! <3 I learned a new thing and I am trying to read your story. Have kiddos being a distraction but I am excited for it. Only thing I noticed is small typos so far but I'm already enjoying it!

@Esoj I haven't added too much Sci-fi to my library yet. So I'll give yours a read.

My action/adventure set in a fantasy world. When the world is overcome by monsters it will take a bit of a monster to begin unraveling the secrets behind the fall. An escape from slavery and a quest for vengeance are only the beginning for Rhunal the she-orc, but there is much more in store for her than that. And it will take the friendship of a human to achieve it.

Okay, this thread has many stories to watch, I will ask patience. First your story @WolfUnderTheMoon89
I love it! I really like the idea of packs and pseudo-medieval pseudo-natural world hieratical organization of the different aspects of existence and daily life. Your writing is beautiful, the descriptions are great and the action is well-paced, and the characters are well defined and act great! I will be reading this in my spare time, spect my comments :smiley:

Wow, I read it all in an instant and really enjoy it! I will say that I, actually, fell in love with the characters and the world! I will wait for the new episodes! Keep up the good work!

@Berserker I loved your story so far, I found a mage orc to be a really interesting topic! I will read it in my spare time, wow there are a lot of talented people here. Thank you everyone for the good reads and the good vibes! I hope you like my story too!

I have a manga instead of a novel, but it is sci-fi! Gonna check yours out

Ooh sci-fi! I'll check yours out in a bit. :wink:

Here are mine! I see there's a lot of stories in this thread already, so feel free to choose any of the 3 novels (if any)! :smiley:

Genre: Drama, Mystery, Psychological Thriller
Unravel the secrets and mysteries hidden in a small town through the eyes of a singer, a policeman, and a school counselor. Clues to the subsequent murders are hidden in human relationships of the past and the dark abyss of the Internet! :smiley:

Genre: Historical Romance, Fantasy
Follow Empress Wu Zetian's treacherous journey from the hands of enemy Tufan soldiers back to the Forbidden City where she battles foes from within her own kingdom.

Genre: Scifi, Action, Thriller
A short story collection that involves science fiction, fast-paced action scenes, and dystopic universes.

I subscribed :sunglasses: