Share your favorite line from the most recent chapter you've written/released (+ your link)

Leyelle 2023-12-31 14:26:34 UTC #1

I can’t-can’t think like this - be rational.
Now is the wrong time-it’s the worst time - to -

-For heaven’s sake, Alicia!

You’ve gotta keep it together.

Says the body weeping in front of the canvas.

Trihyo 2023-12-31 14:47:09 UTC #2

Oh ! Here's my favorite line from my recent chapter...
"T̵ h̸ e̵ ̸ w̸o̶ r̴l̶d̵ ̸ i̷ s̸ ̴ d̶i̶r̴ t̶ y̸?̴ ̵ I̷t̸ ̵ i̴ s̴ ̷ i̷ n̸d̸ e̸ e̴d̸.̶.̸.̸
̸̸B̷ u̷ t̵ ̶ y̴ o̵ u̷.̵ too.̷.̶
̵̶a̵ r̸ e̵ ̶ n̶ o̴ ̴d̶ i̷f̷ f̷e̷ r̸e̵ n̸t̸.̷ "

R.n.P 2023-12-31 17:50:47 UTC #3

(In the middle panels)
The dying words of Isabella as she encourages her father Pablo Gomez not to stop fighting the notorious drug lord terrorizing Colombia as she and other family members of other officers were brutally attacked by them to send a message to all law enforcement officers to back off from his drug business.

Leyelle 2024-01-04 20:40:38 UTC #4

“‘Licia,” Mrs. Moon whispers, laying her hand on my hair, smiling at me even as the red-hot lips quiver and the voice shakes, “If you hadn’t forced him to go he would have asked.”

Leyelle 2024-01-05 14:58:47 UTC #5

“There’s a big difference between the guts it takes to do extreme sports and the ones it takes to tell your best friend that you want…want to…” he looks back at the blankets, “And how did you expect me to say anything now? Now that I’m good for nothing - being washed and tended to by caregivers like an infant! Living off my mom’s money! I’m supposed to pitch myself like that?! Well then ‘Hi! I’m useless! Do you want me?!’”

CarltonIsaac 2024-01-05 17:45:14 UTC #6

CarltonIsaac 2024-01-05 17:49:01 UTC #7

"No!" Arden exclaimed, "How do you know this Alvaine will join us?"

CarltonIsaac 2024-01-05 17:49:36 UTC #8

The Slumbering Forest was definitely named by someone who was either devoid of basic senses or in a state of inebriation.

craftsbyblue 2024-01-05 18:35:27 UTC #9

"This one is over-dressed, even by Heap standards. All of his accessories are made out of real gold and precious minerals. In other words, he is extremely rich!"

Daiesha 2024-01-05 18:45:18 UTC #10

I think it would have to be the last line which is, "Too bad I slept with his wife." Something the main character reflected on as she sat across from the wife's husband

llobucervallince 2024-01-05 19:58:05 UTC #11

In this world there's just people, some who heal, and some who hurt.

Leyelle 2024-01-19 20:34:23 UTC #12

“Don’t even begin to pretend you change your clothes daily. You used to wear the same pair of jeans for ten days straight when we were in college.”

Leyelle 2024-01-26 21:50:05 UTC #13

The world is moving too quickly and I want to get off before I puke.

My sigh comes out like vaporous ghosts of those memories I don’t want to let keep haunting me - but I have - have to explain-

Jugg4n4ut 2024-01-26 21:54:32 UTC #14

It is a crucible of thoughts and ideas; where mental magma is churned, boiling hot

Leyelle 2024-02-02 21:55:09 UTC #15

I snatched the radio out of his lap in the middle of one particularly obnoxious emo or pop-punk song, and turned the sound down to an inaudible mutter, hiding the radio under my shirt.

“Give it back.”

“Not on your life. How can you listen to this stuff? It sounds like bad feelings.”

KevinReijnders 2024-02-02 22:06:25 UTC #16

Mmmh, slightly spoilery, but this won't make it to the public in like, 5 years or so haha. (plus no character names so keep guessing ) But I think this is my favorite line from my recent (draft) script.

“What I saw in you that day was how strong, brave and helpful you really are. It as the day that I realized I’m…” he stops for a moment. His heart pounding in his chest /_Shoot your shot!/ he thinks to himself. He closes his eyes, takes a deep breath and continues. “It was the day I realized I’m in love with you.” He opens his eyes again and looks at her. “I have been ever since_.”

quintellit 2024-02-03 02:03:34 UTC #17

"Haha! That's right tiny!"

Leyelle 2024-02-10 18:39:32 UTC #18

“-I have a certain secret weapon that your mother didn’t make.”

JoshRaed 2024-02-11 20:51:25 UTC #19

"I guess after the third drink it feels like I've been here forever"

It's not interesting now, but in context it's some pretty big foreshadowing.

Leyelle 2024-03-01 17:34:14 UTC #20

The adult part of me rambles on diplomatically about how ‘this is just Life.’ But I wish Life would cut itself into bite-sized pieces - at least then it would be easier to swallow - even if it is distasteful.