Yes, I think so too. There is nothing wrong with kinks, but if they are just coming on you strong and half of the book is on verge of an unhealthy unrealistic relationship is just too much. I can't stand abuse and is setting me off when I see teenage girls getting excited over 'daddy' forcing someone to get intimate with him. How can this go just that wrong, like you mentioned when kids are reading this and maybe creating a base of the future relationship?