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Feb 2020

Read about half of the first episode. I like the concept, but not the execution of the story. I got bored about three paragraphs in but I pushed to about halfway through. The flow is a bit dull, like someone telling a story they heard from someone else rather than the story unfolding before the reader's eyes. It lacks a sense of intrigue thus not allowing me to invest in it.

As advice, read more best-selling books of the genre (fantasy/sci-fi) and study the art of writing, structure and pace of these stories.

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Thank you so much for pointing it out. I'll try to keep it in mind as I try a new approach on how to tell the story. ^_^

I'm fairly new creator here in Tapas, but in case you'd like to check out my fantasy comic here you go;

Have a lovely day! :green_heart::green_heart::green_heart:

Three chapters in but much more to come. Would love any constructive feedback.

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I´m new at this... if you can help me pls... :slight_smile: