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Oh sure, as far as comics go, the one that I go back to occasionally is something I started...eons ago, it's called Avu, and although I did actually...thumbnail out all 700-something pages, I have never posted them online because they looked like this:

It was this very confusing magic cat horror comic that I didn't have the skills to make yet. (nor the fonts lololol) So, as you can see--I uh...scanned in every frame in this. I used pencils, pens, sharpies, and some very hazardous photoshop shading up until about chapter 33 when I decided to save trees and trust in my photoshop brushes. I actually started taking digitally painting seriously solely because of this comic.

And then I was like, well every comic has to have concept art, so I stretched out my concept art muscles and painted this character. This is the villain, PS. Look how villainous she is.

And I was Extremely Proud of It. Although I had an actual Art Degree at this point--you just couldn't tell whenever I turned on Photoshop. I was better at msn paint honestly. I was an acrylic painter doing small jobs in children's illustration. I had never been trained to do digitally at school, and every time I had done Photoshop for an assignment it came out...well a lot like this. A huge wall for me. But, I was determined. I wanted to get the comic good enough to post online (spoiler, I still haven't and will never finish this comic).

So after about...I want to say several years later and 60 pages of posting and trying to improve (both in the comic outside of the comic since I still do art gigs), I got here:

And this is a page I never posted actually. I finished it, but didn't want to end at this spot. So, I put Avu on ice about 4-5 years ago, but I still draw it from time to time. So remember that super hot concept art?

This is the same character, done about...some time last year. So yeah, improvements were made. And, while no one ever read this comic, and I only have like...4 episodes of it posted nowadays because most of it is so cringe and so confusing, it's the story closest to my heart because it's the reason I paint the way I do and in the direction that my style took me.

@sartinjacqueline05 Ooh this is nice! I can already see how much more even the proportions are!

@Kelheor Oh nice! I can definitely see the improvement in lineart. I also like how the composition has improved as well!

@Freemints30 The linework is definitely a lot smoother in your newer uploads! I also like the way that your speech bubbles have improved to look more like they belong :smiley:

@spadesart Oh wow! Your old work looks amazing already but I really like how your colours have improved over the years.

@elisabatla Wow that's a great improvement over just 6 months! I love how much smoother the lineart has gotten :0

@emvink The old one has a lovely messy style to it but I absolutely love the way your new art looks more intentional!

@Enigma_the_Slimy_Boi Oooh pixel art! I absolutely agree that the colours have improved a lot. I also think the expression looks so much more emotive. Nice work!

@Emma I think you should give yourself more credit! I can definitely see an improvement here, not only in terms of lineart but also in terms of proportion. And the shadows you've used in the newest one really makes the panels look more put together !

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@CursedBeasts I love seeing the progress too! I love how your linework has become more expressive! Your speech bubbles also look a lot nicer too :smiley:

@mimisimon09 I would love to see your non comic work too! That being said, just looking at the older comic you've shown, I can see improvements everywhere! I especially like how much more deliberate the shadows are in the newer page :slight_smile:

@GesuGesu Oh wow that is a huge improvement!Thank you for sharing (along with the insight into how your workflow has changed, that was particularly interesting) It's nice to see how mucch more efficient you've gotten with your workflow

@uselessgoddess Haha I know the feel. I cannot follow tutorial for the life of me and have only started drawing my comic like a week ago lol. But wow thanks for sharing! I definitely agree that that's an improvement. I especially love how the colours have become a lot more pleasing to the eye o

@rajillustration Wow! I loved seeing your art journey. That new piece is absolutely stunning!

Oh boy, I'm about to dredge up some dark, dark art memories here hahaha.

My current comic is actually a reboot of an absolutely terrible one that I ran back in 2012-2014. Back then, I was putting out maybe... one or two pages a night? Or at a minimum, 3 pages a week. It was extremely lazy and low effort. Also, I was young, using a very bad art program, and an.... inexperienced artist lets say.

On average, most pages looked kind of like this, and I would type the dialogue below the page. (I was really into another very popular webcomic which did that at the time, and it was easier than trying to deal with text or messy hand-lettering. Again, super lazy.)

Later pages got a bit better, but were still kind of visually confusing:

I guess for a more direct comparison there's how I draw this dude now:

vs way back then:

Things I'm proud of:

-Better (though still not great) anatomy
-Cleaner (though still rather messy) lineart
-Less lazy in general?
-Sort of learning how to do BGs though that's still a weak point
-Actually putting text on the pages like a normal human being

(Also, making so much art consistently for that long actually taught me a lot. Despite being so ugly and cringey and difficult to read nowadays, I learned a lot and still hold that thing close to my heart. Enough that now ~8 years later I'm trying to finally do it justice and give those characters the ending they deserve.)

I'm glad to see that you're picking up an old work that you worked on in the past and are doing it justice now. I love how your comic panels have become more cohesive, rather than just being individual drawings of characters with no backgrounds! I'd love to see how you progress as you continue working on this :smiley:

Literally the same two characters so that’s good.

2017

2020

Stuff I’m proud of:

Line work improving

Improved anatomy: (Still not perfect, but definitely improved)

Finding my style: (Took awhile, especially for how I wanted eyes to look. Style been hard to find due to it having a blend of western and eastern influences)

Depth improving: (Her weapon in specific looking more 3-Dimensional rather than a flat picture in 2017)

Thank you! To be fair I went back and re-did the speech bubbles & text of the old art in Photoshop when I was adapting the pages for the site, because if I downsized the original, the text would be unreadable, and PS speech bubbles aren't as expressive as hand-drawn ones lol.

And yeah, I think the art looks way nicer with a lot of black shading and lines.

Thank you!
I was kinda joking about the eyebrows being the most important but it's true! I work on such a small scale with my pixel art that adding eyebrows allows me to be far more expressive, it's incredible what a difference four pixels can make.

@AilyneGouveia Oooh nice! I can see how much your shading has improved- I love it!

@O-1-D Oh nice! It nice that even though you ditched the lineart, the shapes are so much more recognisable in your newer version. (also more pizza is better pizza lol)

@Reveal Oh this is wonderful! That linework has improved so much! I'm glad you managed to figure your own style out (I had the same issue for a long time, and I'm still working on it)

@sushy00 I can 100% see the improvement here! I love that you're not shying away from backgrounds anymore (I'm still guilty of this lol) and it's lovely to see how your style has evolved!

@Lucca_Vendramel Oh my! I love this! your linework is so much cleaner now and I love how much more deliberate your linework is now!

It can definitely be a headache, I don't regret it though.
It gives my work a bit of a recognizable identity here on Tapas.

Buckle in, folks. This is gonna be a long ride...

So here's a page from the earliest comic with Rekki and Subo in, from allll the way back in 2004. It didn't have a name:

Then here's the next version, which was the first version of what was called "Fan Dan Go":

Then a couple of years later I tried again working in a more digital style. God, at the time I actually thought this looked good? :cry_02:


Aaaand then I took an extended break, did a lot of commissions, short comics, worked on some games, learned to paint and 3D model, came out of the closet, got engaged and... eventually rebooted with a new name. So now a page of Errant with Rekki and Subo looks like this:

Overall, I'm fairly pleased. Always room for improvement, but I feel like I've come a long way since that first example done in my late teens.

I once thought I was to cool for references. I was wrong. Look at that toycar, it's terrible and I love it.

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Well my comic idea has only existed since 2017 and the comic itself only a year and a half so there's not much improvement. But for the beginning of chapter two since I was having some trouble getting start, I reused pages I'd done about 2 years ago, about 6 months before the comic officially started. Technically this was the first page of my comic (only the chapter two text was added later)

And this was the first version of the first page done Jan 2019.

And the remastered from December 2019. I do redraws occasionally, but rare of full pages. When I started the comic I really struggled with Hugh's character model so when I finished the first chapter I took a hiatus and remaster certain panels and occasionally full pages when I really thought non of it was salvageable. But even for this first page I kept the panel of Hugh looking at the bottles (and the one with him grabbing a bottle). It's actually the exact same linework, I just went over it a second time with more line weight.


This was way back, like 2014/2015(?) and I had this as my Deviantart I.D. (not to be confused with a profile avatar)

This one was made this year back in January as a replacement

I say that I improved on:

My line-less style
My hold on color
The semi realistic/naturalistic look
Anatomy
Designs
etc,.