1)Great examples with color, uh I think it's colorful enough (starts from chapter 2) 1/2 point.
2)Comics that show mood and feeling, It shows. 1 point.
3)Funnies, it's 40% comedy. 1 point.
4)Weird and out there, maybe not, it's too normal and logical for a fantasy. 0 point.
5)A good story, I dunno different people have different preferences. 1/2 point.
well, it's 3 out of 5.
here's my comic: