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How fast or did it take your fl and ml to fall in love? Showing attraction to each other early on is still a slow burn right?

My story a slow burn and I'm 67 sub away from 100 but i don't want to do sub4sub since i don't generate genuine readers from that but if you interested:

'Keep your friends close but keep your enemies closer'

I wonder if Vincent saw me as a friend or as an enemy?

What happens when Riona, an Elven princess, gets betrayed by her best friend, Vincent who she has been friends with for more than decade?

And of course it is no ordinary betrayal when Riona loses her best friend Vincent, her kingdom and Audrey, her maiden who was like a sister to her...

Now seeking revenge instead of making a deal with the devil she makes a deal with the northern duke...

revenge/slow burn romance/ tragedy/ historical
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I think it's still slow burn if it takes them a while to actually become a couple and progress through the stages of their relationship. This is the case in "Damsel in the Red Dress." Attraction was felt on my male lead's part more or less immediately and on the female leads part it took a couple of years, but it took 15 years for them to start becoming a couple.

In "A Dozen Morning Glories" my male lead asks the female lead out the day they meet, but still the progression of their relationship would probably count as a little more slow burn rather than whirlwind