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Really want to read other's work but doing sub for sub, while functionally useful, is less fun! Let's do comment for comment! I will be reading and leaving a comment to reflect on the work, if you could do the same and do so for others in this thread we could have fun and get a little more satisfying support from our peers!

I'll be trying to avoid "this is so great"'s and try to say something that is specific and could be useful for future chapters. Not that it must be criticism, but like "the way you did this, communicated that idea well" or "that expression makes me think blahblahblah"

If there's a particular chapter you want focus on, let me know!

Here's mine:

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Bloodlines. Magic. Betrayal...

Tyler always thought he was just an ordinary teenager—until he discovers he's the heir to the Scarlet Arcanist, the most powerful magical bloodline in history. Now, creatures born from shadows hunt him, secrets threaten to unravel, and his family's past refuses to stay buried.

Chapthers below:
Vol. 01:

The Twilight of the Arcanists
Jake
Tyler
Hyan
Tyler
Jake
Hyan
Tyler
Monica
Tyler
Hyan
Tyler2

I'd love to do comment for comment! no chapter preference, since I have no comments yet XD

13th March 2162, 2:00 AM – A cell that holds more than just a prisoner…
Captain John and his soldiers stand on edge as a sedated monster begins to stir, his secrets locked behind a steel mask and unreadable eyes. Meanwhile, in the shadows of rebellion, Darius’s past collides with a deadly plan to bring the military to its knees.
Will the truth he holds ignite salvation—or spark a war?
:lock: The cage is opening. And so is the storm.
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subbed and commented!! here's minee

Hello there!

My new work, The Plight of the Twelve Olympians, just released a new chapter: Grains.

This story is about the thoughts of the Olympians on the world they live in and their feelings... that may or may not lead to certain actions that can affect the world as we know it.

I hope you continue to support my works :)) Thank you!!

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Synopsis:

These lowly creatures have made this world their own. They act as if they own it, as if they no longer need us.

Well.

We shall see how far they can make it on their own. They do not need us? Then we shall make their lives a tiny—just teeny, tiny—bit harder.

Hello there, everyone!

My new work just released a new chapter: Tides.

The Plight of the Twelve Olympians is about the Olympians' thoughts about the world they live in. That means anger, frustration, and ego overload. Of course, mortals may or may not face retribution... but will the gods have enough power to do that?

I hope you continue to support my works and subscribe. I'd love to be friends with you all, so feel free to message me. Thanks so much!

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Synopsis:

These lowly creatures have made this world their own. They act as if they own it, as if they no longer need us.

Well.

We shall see how far they can make it on their own. They do not need us? Then we shall make their lives a tiny—just teeny, tiny—bit harder.

commented! not sure I have much in the way of feedback or useful comments but your art is pretty <3