subbed! :))
Your first chapter is hooking!! The letters are the ones that hooked me as they show the raw thoughts and feelings of the characters. The second and third chapter showed so much of your storytelling skills, and that cliffhanger!! And the fourth chapter!! It's rather amusing that your fourth chapter has the same chapter name as my fourth chapter :')
Anyway, here's my work, Chasing Grief! Chasing Grief is a story about a woman who lost her love and tries to navigate her feelings of grief and loss. She does this by going through life, death, and everything in between to find answers to all her questions, and maybe reconcile with her heart. This story is in poetry form, so it is full of imagery, emotions, and feelings.
