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Awesome, Aeneas1 :slight_smile: Good concept you are working on.

Reviewed it in the comments section. Second chapter was good. First was a little too summaryish, but that might've been the point, skimming the backstory to get to Draven's main story.

"You should have said no.."

Chapter 5 is live now! :heart_exclamation:
It’s a story about the pull of unhealthy love and the haunting difficulty. I’d absolutely love your feedback—constructive criticism is more than welcome as I’m looking to grow and improve. If you enjoy my work, please feel free to like, view, and subscribe (SubForSub).

Hello there, mine is set in the Forgotten Realms, the main setting of Dungeons and Dragons. Full colored 17 pages on 4 chapters filled with paladins, a foul-mouthed duergar and soon, dragons too!
My plan is to upload a new chaper of 3 or pages long every month from now on.

Try mine?