I get that what you're going for is a clash between your and JensRichard's works with his being 'blue life' and yours being 'red life' but it'd be better if you wouldn't go around calling someone's work 'lame' out of the blue.
To each his own but someone is actually excited about something and working hard on it.
But eh...I'm just a guy on the internet, so why would you listen, right?
Just don't be mean to others, okay bro?